they look like cheeeeeese hahaaaa
they look like cheeeeeese hahaaaa
IM SO MAD
Oh my god, I love Worms so much
They make my belly so warm and achy I love worms I have a little tapeworm inside me god this is awesome
Bro same I love putting them in my cookies and giving them to grandpapa yum yum 😋
man, i thought it was funny at first, but seeing the little the little guy getting abused because of his religion is kinda fucked, like, do you really think its funny to portrait jehovah witnesses as aliens and make them go through this sort of abuse and suffering? you should legitimately rethink about how you want to go forward in life man, i pray for your improvement
but there's funny reptile dinosaur man i like it
5 star
You gonna make me bonkers one day so watch you're tone young man or else it's time out for you.
There's legitimately so much charm in the style you decided to go with
I legitimately really like how everything moves and the amount of expression the character have, and how some of these scenes are shot, like in the rain scene where you just cut to a water hose showering on the drawing is legitimately pretty good
My only real criticisms is that I feel like certain scenes could be a little faster, and I feel like it ended too soon?
I legitimately thought that there was going to be more after she starts catching on fire, but then it just ended and I felt like it was a setup for something that never happened, if that makes any sense
Still, I think this is pretty great, and you got something really strong going on right here
I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the future.
Thank you much. I'm glad you like it.
In regards to the pacing and underwhelming conclusion, you're feelings are completely understandable and correct.
I had originally planned for the video to be much longer -- about double the length.
The main character (Lemon Cake) would've made it to school on time, but as a result of her soggy situation, she'd begin to feel flustered at the thought of standing out -- further adding payoff to the downpour as well as developing the theme of anxiety.
Unfortunately, I got a bit overly ambitious for my first cartoon and, mainly due to time constraints, had to reduce what I'd produce.
However, for any future Slice's of Anxiety, I'll likely actually continue to make them short in length as I feel the duration better fits what I'm going for.
And because of this, I'll make sure to keep in mind the shorter nature of them during the writing process, hopefully resulting in a much more solid pace / narrative.
Thank you for the feedback, it's much appreciated. 👍
have a bloomin' day.
i love game chumps please make more game rumps animation related animations this one was so fun i was giggling and loling really hard through the whole thing man but the only criticism i have on your animation is that there is a woman on it and she is abusive which I dont like because abuse is not cool and so isn't women but I specially dont like women abusing others ok so please take this criticism to heart so you dont repeat the same mistake in castlevania 7 so im giving it 3 stars but overall this is so fucking cool man i can't believe game grumps are making a comeback in the 21st century
Sorry you didn’t like the ending, i’ll keep it in mind. Thanks for the review.
I know I already commented on the twitter post, but I can't help but state it again in here
You always manage to put a smile on my face
As usual, this is great
Keep up the wonderful works
Hope you're having a nice valentine's day, and a good day in general
Thank you June, your comments are always so nice ^_^ Happy valentine's day!
This is sincerely so nice
Really shows how even the smallest of content creators or the new faces always have a chance to make it big in here
I'm so glad this got Daily 1st and the frontpage.
Thank you!
is that a femboy?
im gonna keep you in brazil
dude brazil is so FUCKING awesome(!(?))
this kind of audio make me pround of being brazilian
Seeing Alloy finally being used again and getting the attention he always deserved feels amazing
I always adored his design and the ideas behind this character, and after learning a little bit of the backstory behind the character and the troubles you've faced when tried to bring him to life just made me interested in the character even more
I genuinely hope you can reconsider the Alloy cartoon again, and maybe more projects involving him, I think Alloy should finally get his chance after spending so much time in the shadows
Best of luck, man, good job as always.
Thanks for the thoughtful comment. Well I can't say when, I definitely do plan to have at least one or two little shorts with him in the future<3
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